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According to be required by our lecturer, I read three stories from fan fiction site and I am here to reveal my personal thoughts about the three stories I have read. Even though I am not enough good at writing stories, based on my acknowledge, I suppose to review honestly. I am beginning with the story” WANTING TO BELONG”. This story is an emotional and heartbreaking story. A girl named Hilland Jeager plays main role in it.The author of this story has manifested the emotions of a girl, who yearns for love of her family even though she was driven from home by her mother, in front of the reader’s view. The major role has been created as a lesbian which means homosexual in women. I really appreciate the writer because the emotions are expressed through the every single word. While reading, it does not seem like reading, but like being in the world of the story and feeling that real pain through the writer’s words. The one of the best strategies used by the author is that passing a part of this story emotionally to next to attract to the readers.

In the line ” Why did my mom hate me because of my sexuality?”, it can be seen that author has expressed the real pain of longing for a mother’s love. And also, the bond between friends has been mentioned. By describing the protagonist as a confident and courage character after she is kicked out of home, the author assists the readers to build their confidence and courageousness in their entire life. However, somewhere the writer has created the leading character as emotionally weak. Even though protagonist is described as a character who has succeeded with many struggles in life, her wish to reunite with her mother is showing her emotional weakness and it can be viewed in the sentence ” Even though life was going well, I longed to be reunited with my mom”. Overall, it is really heart touched story to me while reading. In my personal point of view, this narrative really deserves to be the one of the greatest stories. Here is the link to find this story https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7641162/1/Wanting-to-Belong

The second story that was found interesting by me is “insomnia”. The language style of this story is strong and different. Insomnia is generally an inability to sleep, but the writer has used a better way to expose about insomnia. Every piece of this story happens in the dream, but it does not let you feel that and it just seems like happening in the reality. Even though the author has created two characters in it, he has just given the importance to the leading characters throughout the story. The uses of adjectives and the expressions of the emotions are on the top. The long sentences are not used in this narrative as much as I have read others. It clearly shows that author has come with this strategy to get the attention of the readers. The way story has been moved is fabulous and he has taken the customers of his story into the new world of insomnia. His imagination is out of the words. From the beginning to the end the story is lively. At this point, the author needs to be complimented, and honestly, he travels in the perfect way. link https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10412558/1/Insomnia

The final narrative, which is going to be reviewed, is shinning like the stars. It is not as exciting as I expected and it is completely about the depression that every body faces while becoming a teenager. Although the author has expressed the emotions of the main character, the quality of having great language skill is still low . It is possible to be boring to readers, so there is a room for the improvement in comparison with others. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11108388/1/Shining-Like-The-Stars

I feel relax because I have finished my review . in my story , i would like to includes some ideas like the story” waiting to belong” has because the style of structuring and the accurate way expressing the emotions s really inspired me.

BY KAYA.